Episode 152: Exploring Character and Setting Through Language

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This week, Angeline and Holly discuss the ways in which you can deepen your characterization and make more believable settings by using the awesome power of words!

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Discussion Points:

Revealing character through language:

  • Social status
    • Dropping of particular letters
  • Level of education
    • Mis-using words, mis-pronouncing words
  • Use of profanity
  • Talkative/non talkative
    • Characters that talk more and dominate a conversation are usually higher status or, of course, may be compensating for a lack of status
    • Anxiety can either make someone quiet or over-talkative
  • Private or over-sharer
  • Access to other cultures/languages
  • Colloquial or formal language
    • Do they speak differently to different people/in different situations?
  • What part of the world/country they’re from
    • Local dialect
  • Verbal tics
  • You can use all of these things to show contrast between your different characters. It can also cause conflict: what happens when two talkative people get together? What misunderstandings happen when people have a conversation in half sentences?

Revealing setting through language:

  • Particularly noticeable in historical fiction and fantasy/sci-fi
  • Words specific to your world
    • Jargon
    • Profanity, insults, and blasphemy
    • Idioms and proverbs
    • Curses and blessings
  • Words that are whispered
  • Words that are banned

If you’re being really strict:

  • Do you know the origin of a particular word or phrase?
    • When did it start being used? (Remember that usages change over time)
    • Who coined it? (Remember that first recorded usage is the first time it was written and used in a particular way. It may have been common vernacular before that)
  • Phrases/words attributed to Shakespeare:
    • All that glistens is not gold (merchant of Venice)
    • As good luck would have it (The Merry Wives of Windsor)
    • Break the ice (The Taming of the Shrew)
    • Fair play (The Tempest)
    • A laughing stock (The Merry Wives of Windsor)
    • In a pickle (The Tempest)
    • Pound of flesh (The Merchant of Venice)
    • Wear one’s heart on one’s sleeve (Othello)
    • Wild-goose chase (Romeo and Juliet)
    • And individual words such as: barefaced, belongings, dwindle, hostile, and overblown
    • By using these phrases, are you suggesting that Shakespeare existed in your world?
  • Dickens was another great inventor of words:
    • Such as: abuzz, the creeps, devil-may-care, flummox, on the rampage, and whiz-bang
  • Chaucer:
    • Words such as: plumage, dismembering, femininity, and galaxy



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